Page 2 of 4 FirstFirst 1234 LastLast
Results 16 to 30 of 55

Thread: Post Your Rhymes Here

  1. #16
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by DaTPRiNCE
    FLAT OUT NASTY, you killed it with these punchlines.
    Yup. Hey, where are your rhymes prince?

  2. #17
    The Knicks are Back DaTPRiNCE's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    Brooklyn N.Y.........Alexandria,Egypt in the blood
    Posts
    3,862
    Rep Power
    12

    Default

    naw i dont rapped i tried it before did okthen stopped lmao, i'm of a poetry writer when it comes to that im trying to find my poems but i have no recent ones......it was a hobby when i was younger though.

  3. #18
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by DaTPRiNCE
    naw i dont rapped i tried it before did okthen stopped lmao, i'm of a poetry writer when it comes to that im trying to find my poems but i have no recent ones......it was a hobby when i was younger though.
    iight lol find it. My poetry is iight girls tend to like it more than guys, my raps are real good tho everyone feels them,

  4. #19
    The Gold Mac MSGKnickz33's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    CT
    Posts
    4,474
    Rep Power
    13

    Default

    Originally Posted by DaTPRiNCE
    MSG those were come tight rhymes, and Streetdreams that was hot too, i wrote this poem that was published in a book way back when i was in 8th grade, i got 50 bucks for it loll, im trying to find it so i could post it, flat out poetry at it's finest loll
    thanks bruh...you must be good if you got 50 bucks in 8th grade. When i was younger my poetry skills were weak. I had some good rhymes written down from high school but i got alot better over the past year.

    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    MSG you killed it there man. Best one out of the three. I'm tellin ya, them bball references are freakin beast.
    thanks...ill have more lines here eventually. I love doing this...you real nice at this too. I can tell you got skills for this...i rapped over the it aint hard to tell beat a while ago. I got those lyrics somewhere on my comupter..ill find them tomorrow and post them. I think mine were harder, but yours were better. Heres a couple lines that i remember...

    "When it comes to firing two, Ill find the best point of view
    Im talkin about where I can see you best, not my perspective
    but now you been put to rest like an item thats defective
    feds dont be thinkin you columbo because i shoot detectives"

    "lay you down like wall to wall carpet
    when it comes to beef, i always start it
    my sh!ts retarded, im the mothaf**** hardest
    On my back is a target"

  5. #20
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by MSGKnickz33
    thanks bruh...you must be good if you got 50 bucks in 8th grade. When i was younger my poetry skills were weak. I had some good rhymes written down from high school but i got alot better over the past year.



    thanks...ill have more lines here eventually. I love doing this...you real nice at this too. I can tell you got skills for this...i rapped over the it aint hard to tell beat a while ago. I got those lyrics somewhere on my comupter..ill find them tomorrow and post them. I think mine were harder, but yours were better. Heres a couple lines that i remember...

    "When it comes to firing two, Ill find the best point of view
    Im talkin about where I can see you best, not my perspective
    but now you been put to rest like an item thats defective
    feds dont be thinkin you columbo because i shoot detectives"

    "lay you down like wall to wall carpet
    when it comes to beef, i always start it
    my sh!ts retarded, im the mothaf**** hardest
    On my back is a target"
    I can tell you go hard man. Detail man. I can see you got somethin goin on man. That **** is hard man, forreal. I really dont call my rhymes hard, i prefer "the realness". I like to keep things real u know? I want to stay real, unlike these fake ass rappers comin out nowadays.

  6. #21
    The Gold Mac MSGKnickz33's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    CT
    Posts
    4,474
    Rep Power
    13

    Default

    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    I can tell you go hard man. Detail man. I can see you got somethin goin on man. That **** is hard man, forreal. I really dont call my rhymes hard, i prefer "the realness". I like to keep things real u know? I want to stay real, unlike these fake ass rappers comin out nowadays.
    I like that style the best...cormega is one of the realest rappers. I can write some real stuff too...heres a verse from something i wrote..

    "Cleaned myself up and threw out my gun
    Threw out the drugs and the box cutter
    Called up my mom and told her that I love her
    She was left to raise my sisters
    Put them through a lot more pain then a blister
    Left them in the rain filling bitter
    But ill give it time, Iíll win them back
    Iíve cleaned my mind, never going back
    Im here to stay like rap music
    Just gotta find a job, I know I can do it
    I believe in myself
    And thank god for my health
    And bringin me off the streets
    Now im singin over peaceful beats
    Fingers are pressin repeat
    I learn a new lesson each week
    Thatís what im stressing when I speak
    You donít have to go through what I did
    Material things had me blinded
    But now I love the state of mind that im in"

    I try to do all kinds of music...write songs for the ladies, make deep stuff, go hard...the only thing im not good at is doing the commercial style. Im not good at rappin about my money, and getting drunk in clubs having sex with 3 or 4 girls etc., but i dont really like that style for the most part.

  7. #22
    The Gold Mac MSGKnickz33's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    CT
    Posts
    4,474
    Rep Power
    13

    Default

    Im on these streets tryin to make me some money
    Dont laugh sonny
    f*** around and get your nose bloody
    I aint have no buddy's
    Im a one man Army
    Part Italian like Danilo Gallinari
    You cant harm me
    Im not a human im a terminator
    If you dont know the rules you cant learn it later
    Nows the time, prime for prime
    rhyme for rhyme im the greatest
    I made this song and now you played this song
    If you gonna rap it dont say it wrong
    Haters pray im gone, When i stop reppin NY
    that'll be the day im gone, dont ever say im gone
    snitches get ripped like a bong,
    Or ripped like a thong on a fat chick
    From Ct to NY to La I run this rap sh!t
    unload mad clips into your back hip
    And if this track skip get yourself a new cd player
    signin out is the Mac 10 Ill see yall later

  8. #23
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by MSGKnickz33
    I try to do all kinds of music...write songs for the ladies, make deep stuff, go hard...the only thing im not good at is doing the commercial style. Im not good at rappin about my money, and getting drunk in clubs having sex with 3 or 4 girls etc., but i dont really like that style for the most part.
    Yep. thats is what music is supposed to be. Like I bet i could be decent if i tried to write about screwin girls in clubs, but I don't want to. its crap and not real. Hate that style.

    Here's the first verse from my Nas is Like Cover

    Yo, Love is Like droppin every beat, or hearin every rhyme
    Love is like stoppin the violence, at any given time
    Maybe like changin names, to avoid hate crimes
    Different aliases, comin on at different showtimes
    First I was The Classic, but times have changed
    to fresh, to the way i dress, always look the very best
    but i think, why cant i just keep things true?
    When i can use BK's Finest, The original, known by me and you
    Music is my savior, music is my life
    Music is my love, my materialistic wife
    As long as the sunshine illuminates the sky
    My one soul for music, will never ever die
    If i'm in the studio, i bekillin it on the tracks
    But i'm not killin brothas with Aks and MACs
    You see, i believe in peace, not the drama
    But theres no peace with disgruntled lovers and single baby mamas
    If they need to ease for peace, they go to hear the beat
    To relieve they feet, but people want to hear mainstream
    But what they dont realize, is mainstream is just the fame and gold
    Because the real artists sing whats in their soul
    And sure, all the cash, money, and ice, it really sounds nice
    So i be writin different, i bring this spice
    So let me end this verse on a true note, kids
    Cause when it comes to music, hats what love really is....


    Ehh. Obviously, this is about love and music. I think its pretty good. how about yall? I dont think it compares to it aint hard to tell though; i killed it on that one more than this. Like i probably said before, this song aint even half close to being done, i think this verse could use a little editing, but im not really sure.

  9. #24
    The One and Only KING~POETIQ's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Queens the Foundation
    Posts
    1,807
    Rep Power
    7

    Default

    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    I want to cover so many songs, like mostly from Illmatic and It Was Written. Amazing Beats.
    Streetdreams, how ironic.....

    Let me give yall a little background....

    I wrote my first poem in 7th grade as a homework assignment. It was actually like an emo-ish, dark poem. My teacher loved it, and then i realized i had a thing for it. But it was just one of those things i didn't care about. But i started writing in summer of 08. Like i said, I actually started just writing poetry. Just poetry. About love, mostly.... Anyway, hiphop music made a reentry into my life and i started listening to so many beats. Then i friend of mine actually got to recordin his own stuff, so i guess i started just placing beats on my poetry. I dont got much time to write, about half hour a day, im real busy. But whenever i'm free, yeah, this is what i do. Im working on about 4 songs at a time, and just finished that song above 2 days ago. Right now i'm mostly working on a cover of "Nas is Like" titled "Love is Like", like what love is to music, the body, the mind, etc etc.... i think i'm going to have like 6 or 7 verses when i'm done.
    That's good Streetdreams. The more you practice, the better the song and lyrical content. Just stay focused man. Remember that if you wanna make it as an emcee you have to put in more work than others. There's always someone out there more hungrier than you that's why you gotta put in more effort to accomplish any goal. Good luck wit it.

  10. #25
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    That's good Streetdreams. The more you practice, the better the song and lyrical content. Just stay focused man. Remember that if you wanna make it as an emcee you have to put in more work than others. There's always someone out there more hungrier than you that's why you gotta put in more effort to accomplish any goal. Good luck wit it.
    Thanks bro. I usually do this just for fun but recently i realized i got a real thing for this rap game. If college don't work out, this is my alternate. How did you get started sly?

    What do everyone think about my Love is Like verse?

  11. #26
    The One and Only KING~POETIQ's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Queens the Foundation
    Posts
    1,807
    Rep Power
    7

    Default

    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    Thanks bro. I usually do this just for fun but recently i realized i got a real thing for this rap game. If college don't work out, this is my alternate. How did you get started sly?

    What do everyone think about my Love is Like verse?
    Well, I love music. One of the reasons I went to FL was because I had connections to people that produce and rap. Once I got there I got lazy and didn't do much with music. All I was doing was partying. Not until last september did I actually want to pursue music with a passion. I don't want the music that I love to die off. So what I decided to do was to start writing rhymes. But at the same time I do appreciate the production side also. So right now just saving money for production equipment while I continue to perfect my verses.

  12. #27
    Member Knicks1stLady's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Born in The Bronx but live N Harlem
    Posts
    168
    Rep Power
    7

    Default

    Ya'll got sum tight skillz in here

  13. #28
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by Knicks1stLady
    Ya'll got sum tight skillz in here
    Thanks yo

  14. #29
    I got Soul StreetDreams21's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Vegas/NY
    Posts
    1,404
    Rep Power
    8

    Default

    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    Well, I love music. One of the reasons I went to FL was because I had connections to people that produce and rap. Once I got there I got lazy and didn't do much with music. All I was doing was partying. Not until last september did I actually want to pursue music with a passion. I don't want the music that I love to die off. So what I decided to do was to start writing rhymes. But at the same time I do appreciate the production side also. So right now just saving money for production equipment while I continue to perfect my verses.
    Thats cool yo. You got hookups. I dont have any. The only rapper friends i gots are in the NYC, aint helpin much. It also doesn't help to know 100% of your school knows who lilwayne is but about 5% know who nas is. its a real shame what the media can do...

    anyway, im really startin to have a passion for this whole music game. Im considering this my college alternate for real

  15. #30
    The One and Only KING~POETIQ's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Queens the Foundation
    Posts
    1,807
    Rep Power
    7

    Default

    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    Thats cool yo. You got hookups. I dont have any. The only rapper friends i gots are in the NYC, aint helpin much. It also doesn't help to know 100% of your school knows who lilwayne is but about 5% know who nas is. its a real shame what the media can do...

    anyway, im really startin to have a passion for this whole music game. Im considering this my college alternate for real
    I hear ya on that one. People don't know good music. Just remember why you're doing it. For the love of the music. In FL I asked a couple of rappers why they were getting into rapping and they said "to become rich and famous". SMH. Rappers like that don't make it. So stay true to the game, streetdreams. Keep it real and everything else will fall in place.

Similar Threads

  1. Replies: 9
    Last Post: Aug 03, 2008, 18:21
  2. Replies: 137
    Last Post: Jul 04, 2008, 19:35
  3. One of the few post ima post this season
    By Kennedy Curse in forum NY Knicks
    Replies: 17
    Last Post: Mar 21, 2008, 13:12
  4. Post Cry
    By Blumatic in forum NY Knicks
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: Feb 25, 2005, 00:19
  5. 10,000th post
    By rady in forum Site Feedback
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: Oct 31, 2004, 17:45

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •