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    Since the hiphop threads are gettin so many hits and we sometimes talk about our own writin i wanted to start this thread.

    Let me start with my cover of "It Ain't Hard to tell"

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    It Ain't Hard To Tell

    There dreams are for real, i conceal
    Not reveal, the hate i once had is so surreal
    In the game it's life or death, rap till you out of breath
    This world, so messed up with the brothas just inhalin the meth
    Stay true like a promise, not feelin so obnoxious
    I'm doin what i wanna cuz New York is my nirvana
    Crack the plates like an earthquake, impact
    Let my poetry take over now so you can lay down or sit back
    Because of my poems i can express through song
    My true love of life and dislike of tempted wrong
    I used to dream of fame but now i dont care what i sell
    From the street corners the young children dwell
    It Ain't hard to tell

    The mormon lives with many wives, religious beliefs
    Inhale from the cold weed, smoked up by the beasts of the east
    Yes the smell of success, not the hefty stress
    This ain't a test, cause you're messin with the best of the best
    The whole world may not be mine, but like a star i shine
    With these words, flows, and freshness new and oh so refined
    Plus classic, not extinct like jurassic
    Opposed to fascists, keepin hopes alive unlike a loved one's ashes
    So hate me, await me, but never suffocate me
    You think you're me just cause you try to relate to me
    My righteous steps in life might land me a wife
    Fate's plan is well, It ain't hard to tell

    This lyrical providin, in which your mind is now residin
    I'll leave you lustin, yeah, i know you think im bluffin
    Speak with urban slang, my word are ridiculous
    Locked on, so meticulous, street laws like Leviticus
    I dominate this rap game with one golden mic
    The shinin' word sparks a strike, givin the fans euphoria
    in your cornea, witness the story of a young kid
    But God forbid, my life come to a skid
    I'm a true fighter, in my book of rhymes im one love writer
    Searchin like a mother for a lost child
    So wise like the old owl, the haters riled
    thought they need not fire
    stop the hatin, just focus and aim higher
    My art is one that excels,
    It ain't hard to tell...




    What do yall think? Post yours too if u got any
    Last edited by StreetDreams21; Feb 19, 2013 at 21:15.

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    They were good...for a high schooler


    Nah, I'm joking streetdreams, they nice. Better than most rappers out there. Keep it up. You headed in the right direction.

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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    They were good...for a high schooler


    Nah, I'm joking streetdreams, they nice. Better than most rappers out there. Keep it up. You headed in the right direction.
    Ha. Thanks Bro. do you write?

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    As for my street poetry...


    Mentality changing by the seasons/reasons that got me vexed/so many treasons/many thoughts circle my mind/trying to unwind/but my feelings caught in a bind/rewind to past situations/limitations of knowledge/creating my hesitations/realize that I control my destiny/my peoples dreams manifesting thru me/seemingly envisioning the future so vividly

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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    As for my street poetry...


    Mentality changing by the seasons/reasons that got me vexed/so many treasons/many thoughts circle my mind/trying to unwind/but my feelings caught in a bind/rewind to past situations/limitations of knowledge/creating my hesitations/realize that I control my destiny/my peoples dreams manifesting thru me/seemingly envisioning the future so vividly
    Usually i aint a fan of short rhymes, but thats pretty good man. Do you cover other beats like i do or just go with the flow?

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    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    Usually i aint a fan of short rhymes, but thats pretty good man. Do you cover other beats like i do or just go with the flow?
    Those rhymes I posted don't go with any beat.


    The only beat I have covered was Nas' "streetdreams". I've been writing on and off since last september. But now that I'm back in NY I'ma go hard (no homo).


    What about you? How long you been writing?

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    the gun in my hand gave me power
    measuring grams, fingers numb from the white powder
    I go to work like Dwight howard
    step in my way and get devoured
    I attack like an animal, I'll tear your face off
    This aint hockey, yall dont wanna face off
    Im skilled in the kitchen, we can have a bake off
    Jazzy Jeff, im not cookin no food but im a chef
    I go to work with pots and pans
    Put a slug in my gun and i shots ya mans
    I aint got no plan, except to fill my pockets
    Your teams losing soldiers like the Houston Rockets
    When will i stop it? never
    Im clever and im still down for whatever
    Whenever, ya girl can get whipped by leather
    I got guns cuz times changed like the weather
    When you see the clouds you know the rain has arrived
    Ill let you die after hours of starvation and being deprived

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    Im about to take a trip down memory lane
    coming out of CT, I aint got none for you like Im greedy
    I enjoy smokin blunts and watchin the knicks on TV
    Nasty Nas, Illmatic...My favorite CD
    From the mind of someone whos philosophical
    its not optional to act logical in my presence
    Im the essence of hip hop
    I used to shop at thrift shops
    until i started to get gwap
    now I got millions from dealings and i love watchin yall catch feelings
    More blood spilling and thugs killing, it aint a joke where im from
    Get smoked if you dont have a gun

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    Not bad, Msg. Not bad. Didn't know that "the most dangerous MC is coming outta"... CT?


    A little too much gunplay for me though. But I did enjoy the basketball references. Good job overall

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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    Those rhymes I posted don't go with any beat.


    The only beat I have covered was Nas' "streetdreams". I've been writing on and off since last september. But now that I'm back in NY I'ma go hard (no homo).


    What about you? How long you been writing?
    I want to cover so many songs, like mostly from Illmatic and It Was Written. Amazing Beats.
    Streetdreams, how ironic.....

    Let me give yall a little background....

    I wrote my first poem in 7th grade as a homework assignment. It was actually like an emo-ish, dark poem. My teacher loved it, and then i realized i had a thing for it. But it was just one of those things i didn't care about. But i started writing in summer of 08. Like i said, I actually started just writing poetry. Just poetry. About love, mostly.... Anyway, hiphop music made a reentry into my life and i started listening to so many beats. Then i friend of mine actually got to recordin his own stuff, so i guess i started just placing beats on my poetry. I dont got much time to write, about half hour a day, im real busy. But whenever i'm free, yeah, this is what i do. Im working on about 4 songs at a time, and just finished that song above 2 days ago. Right now i'm mostly working on a cover of "Nas is Like" titled "Love is Like", like what love is to music, the body, the mind, etc etc.... i think i'm going to have like 6 or 7 verses when i'm done.

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    Originally Posted by MSGKnickz33
    Im about to take a trip down memory lane
    coming out of CT, I aint got none for you like Im greedy
    I enjoy smokin blunts and watchin the knicks on TV
    Nasty Nas, Illmatic...My favorite CD
    From the mind of someone whos philosophical
    its not optional to act logical in my presence
    Im the essence of hip hop
    I used to shop at thrift shops
    until i started to get gwap
    now I got millions from dealings and i love watchin yall catch feelings
    More blood spilling and thugs killing, it aint a joke where im from
    Get smoked if you dont have a gun
    Nice MSG, the 2nd one is just iight, but the first one with all the bball references is real good. I like that. If you just write a song about bball it would totally kill. Good job on the gun references, impressed me on something i don't really are about unless i wrote a diss track lol

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    MSG those were come tight rhymes, and Streetdreams that was hot too, i wrote this poem that was published in a book way back when i was in 8th grade, i got 50 bucks for it loll, im trying to find it so i could post it, flat out poetry at it's finest loll

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    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    Nice MSG, the 2nd one is just iight, but the first one with all the bball references is real good. I like that. If you just write a song about bball it would totally kill. Good job on the gun references, impressed me on something i don't really are about unless i wrote a diss track lol
    thanks...

    aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
    go to the corner store and cop that
    aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
    you the best? homie top that
    you wont get your watch back
    ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
    Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
    in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
    have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
    Lets start this game
    Ill depart your brains
    I do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
    even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
    I hang with the realest thugs
    get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
    im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
    my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
    Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
    Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
    My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
    Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
    I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
    Leavin more then a couple murked

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    Originally Posted by MSGKnickz33
    thanks...

    aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
    go to the corner store and cop that
    aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
    you the best? homie top that
    you wont get your watch back
    ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
    Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
    in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
    have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
    Lets start this game
    Ill depart your brains
    I do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
    even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
    I hang with the realest thugs
    get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
    im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
    my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
    Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
    Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
    My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
    Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
    I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
    Leavin more then a couple murked

    MSG you killed it there man. Best one out of the three. I'm tellin ya, them bball references are freakin beast.

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    Originally Posted by MSGKnickz33
    thanks...

    aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
    go to the corner store and cop that
    aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
    you the best? homie top that
    you wont get your watch back
    ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
    Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
    in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
    have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
    Lets start this game
    Ill depart your brains
    I do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
    even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
    I hang with the realest thugs
    get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
    im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
    my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
    Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
    Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
    My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
    Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
    I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
    Leavin more then a couple murked
    FLAT OUT NASTY, you killed it with these punchlines.

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