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    yea, there's not too many rappers that can freestyle. so if you add that to your arsenal you will be greater than them. it also helps your creativity when you write rhymes. words come to you much quicker.

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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    yea, there's not too many rappers that can freestyle. so if you add that to your arsenal you will be greater than them. it also helps your creativity when you write rhymes. words come to you much quicker.
    I hear that writing songs would be too easy and it just makes things all perfect. i smh at that because i doubt the greatest to ever spit had all-freestyle albums. can you freestyle sly?

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    Originally Posted by StreetDreams21
    I hear that writing songs would be too easy and it just makes things all perfect. i smh at that because i doubt the greatest to ever spit had all-freestyle albums. can you freestyle sly?
    i hear you on that one, streetdreams. even though freestyle would help, most great freestylers are those *****z that dont give a **** about perfecting their rhymes. they're like "i'm too nice, so my rhymes are gonna come out perfect the first time".

    i'm not that good yet because when i freestyle i want to incorporate "bigger" words so that doesnt help. freestylin' has to be done quick, so I'm trying to work on that. simplifying rhymes is not my forte. what about you?

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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    i hear you on that one, streetdreams. even though freestyle would help, most great freestylers are those *****z that dont give a **** about perfecting their rhymes. they're like "i'm too nice, so my rhymes are gonna come out perfect the first time".

    i'm not that good yet because when i freestyle i want to incorporate "bigger" words so that doesnt help. freestylin' has to be done quick, so I'm trying to work on that. simplifying rhymes is not my forte. what about you?
    practically all of lil waynes songs are freestyles (which must explain why hes so bad)

    Damn i suck! i just said that lol. i am not great at freestyling whatsoever, i think ill stick to writing for now. I might get something up later this week

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    Default The Prophecy

    the VERBAL ASSASSIN presents:




    ******"THE PROPHECY"******




    ("GET MONEY" instrumentals)






    (Rhymin' starts at 20th second)

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    I don't have dirty rhymes to throw in but i wanted to see if ayone knew this guy named Klarity.
    Just wanted to show something that suprised me as a fan of rap and hip pop.

    Let me introduce Christian Rap...BUT...with dirty beats/good lyrics and nice flow...check it out...i want opinions.

    Klarity -



    And this next song has a nice beat to it


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    Originally Posted by SLY1984
    the VERBAL ASSASSIN presents:




    ******"THE PROPHECY"******




    ("GET MONEY" instrumentals)






    (Rhymin' starts at 20th second)
    Remember that the rhymes start flowin' at the 20th second. ight, check it:


    My lyrical discourses/are like supernatural forces/parting the Red Sea as if I was Moses/the black roses lay atop the dead corpses/there's no more praying to the wooden crosses/its a total annihilation/the streets are filled with verbal assassination/time for a new foundation/a new beginning/planning on taking more than what's given/I'm schemin'/never believin'/on **** I ain't perceivin'/so **** all that wishin' and day-dreamin'/new thoughts surface the mind/getting hard to unwind/or place down the right line...

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    kingstarbury 3 my rhymes are the freshest
    it aint a good idea for u to test this
    ill leave u breathless and chestless
    the best is me i got the recipe
    u get blown like the whistle of a referee (no homo)
    especially if u talk down to me when your addressin me
    i got b!tches caressin me, u see this beef is stressin me
    its vexin me, perplexin me, thats why i got my mac 10 next to me

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    Originally Posted by KingStarbury3
    kingstarbury 3 my rhymes are the freshest
    it aint a good idea for u to test this
    ill leave u breathless and chestless
    the best is me i got the recipe
    u get blown like the whistle of a referee (no homo)
    especially if u talk down to me when your addressin me
    i got b!tches caressin me, u see this beef is stressin me
    its vexin me, perplexin me, thats why i got my mac 10 next to me
    lol nice ending

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    Radio discusts me, cept when they play cudi
    When the moment get tight, I free my mind day n nite
    yet im SXE, definition straightedge and sexy
    Commercial trying to digest me, Classique, they request me
    Yo, this is true hip hop for the music lovin soul
    For the realness, culture, backpackers, and hearts full of gold
    Background dont matter, if you urban or rural
    Paint it plenty, makin many, express yoself in this mural

    Something I wrote a while back....

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